This week we have been free writing i have chosen to write about motorbikes.
What have you been writing about? Please leave me a comment. ,br/.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. In 2021 I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Miss Rennell. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, 3 May 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question
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HI Dominic it's Munashe.
ReplyDeleteI Like the facts about motorbikes and your story about riding them. Maybe next time can you re read your story so it makes sense.
From Munashe
what do you mean like do you like motorbikes
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